Market Reseach Focus Group for my Double Page Spread

Me: First do you overall like my double page Spread?
Boj: Yes it looks very professional
Owen: Yes it fits in well with the genre of you magazine.


Me: What are the best Features?
Boj: The main image grabs the attention of the  target audience
Owen: The central image is definitely the best feature as it is really eye catching


Me: What can I do to improve my double page spread?
Boj: Add a number to the bottom right hand corner to fulfil the codes and conventions of a real magazine
Owen: Firstly take all of the white out of the text and secondly bring Marcus closer in to the 3 others on your central image.


Me: Would you say this double page spread could be in a magazine?
Boj: maybe, if you do what I suggested above
Owen: No not really, it needs a bit of work, but it is very close to looking legit.


Me: Does my colours fit the theme of my magazine?
Boj: Yes, I can see the black and white fits with the theme of 1960s
Owen: Yes because 60s rock is old and the colours black and white represent the olden days.


Me: Could you compare this to a real magazine double page spread?
Boj: Not really, but it looks good none the less. maybe add/ change the font of the heading perhaps
Owen: No it isn't to that standard just yet as there are a lot of flaws, however with a bit more work then maybe I could.


Me: Does the picture on my double page spread match the theme of my double page spread?
Boj: Yes, the codes and conventions of a Beatles magazine is all there
Owen: Yes it looks great


Me: Does the title match the theme of the magazine?
Boj: No, I think the font could be changed to be more authentic/ old
Owen: Yes I believe it does as it mentions the 1960s however the font could be improved.


Me: What would you add or remove from my double page spread?
Boj: Add another image maybe, or again change the font
Owen: Remove the white parts in the text and add a page number


Me: Out of 10 what would rate my double page spread?
Boj: 7
Owen: 7